Originally Posted by
ootai
Good work Nigel. In my opinion, and I am definitely not an artist, I reckon you were closer with your first go (second picture) than you next try (3rd picture).
You turned him into a conehead. I reckon you should have just taken a bit off right across his head and kept most of that almost right angle on the top left.
I think you may have broaden his shoulders in the 3rd picture as well which brought his head back into a better ratio size wise.
I enjoy seeing your artwork so thanks.